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These days seem to keep getting harder
Just another burden upon my shoulder
I keep pushing to make it through
But my heart keeps getting colder

Every night I sit in crystal tears
Its been so long that I've heard your voice
I loved you so but I left you for a reason
I know I made the right choice

But this truth is getting harder to believe
That I've been chasing you for too long
Just for you to pick me up and let me down
Trapped in some sad love song

My friends think I'm over it by now
By I'm still moving on..
And I'm still walking down the same road
I'm just not that strong

I tell myself that it was for the best
But second thoughts tell me otherwise
That I should go after you again
Despite all your lies

Maybe I can fix this
before its comes too late
I promise to do better
Just stay and wait..

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"Every night I sit in crystal tears
Its been so long that I've heard your voice
I loved you so but I left you for a reason
I know I made the right choice"

Omg, I can so relate to this stanza, Nice poem!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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My friends think I'm over it by now
By I'm still moving on..
And I'm still walking down the same road
I'm just not that strong
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Great write,

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
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But this truth is getting harder to believe
That I've been chasing you for too long
Just for you to pick me up and let me down
Trapped in some sad love song


Wow zach, that was absolutly amazing. that stanza just stood out like crazy, you did a wonderful job with this one, i loved it to bits and bits.
library.

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

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4 posted 03-04-2009 01:07 AM       View Profile for Reborn_Phoenix   Email Reborn_Phoenix   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Reborn_Phoenix

I can feel the sadness in the words you write, which shows me how great a writer you are, for only the best writers can connect to the reader in such away.

Great write.
GothicCherry
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5 posted 03-06-2009 08:55 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

I really like the trapped in some sad love song bit.
stacylynn418
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6 posted 03-07-2009 09:36 PM       View Profile for stacylynn418   Email stacylynn418   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stacylynn418

i really like this poem a lot.
you make the emotion so clear and it has a lot of feeling in it.
well written
 
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