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Falling rain
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0 posted 03-01-2009 11:39 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I don't know about this one.. I was just venting.. I don't think I have a ending stanza to be honest.. But I couldn't think of anything.. lol
Her name resides on my lips
Forever in my head
Whispering on the wind
As moonlight shines on my bed

I listen to the calm sound
And hear her laughter lite the sky
A sunrise so beautiful
It blinds my eyes

Stars will twinkle  
But never come close to her eyes
As I lay in this field of hope
Watching the moon rise

Fireflies play along the creek
And you bask in the star light
Her smile lifts veils of darkness
Like the moon shining bright


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KandyGrl511
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1 posted 03-01-2009 07:07 PM       View Profile for KandyGrl511   Email KandyGrl511   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for KandyGrl511

i like this...

<3 i love u<3

GothicCherry
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2 posted 03-01-2009 08:18 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

I like how you ended it. It fits well. This is really pretty.
nina1522
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3 posted 03-01-2009 08:51 PM       View Profile for nina1522   Email nina1522   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nina1522

god ive never experienced any feeling remotely like this. ive read several of your poems and they are very good. who ever this person you are writing about is very lucky
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4 posted 03-01-2009 11:48 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

This is good for a vent, love the ending.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

 
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