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GothicCherry
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0 posted 02-26-2009 09:40 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for GothicCherry

Ha! Got majorly bored...

Intense emotions lack all sound
As peace descends and hits the ground
The rain begins to fall around
It carries peace as rivers pound
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1 posted 02-26-2009 09:42 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

yay, are butts must be happy, to give us all these poems lol

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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2 posted 02-26-2009 09:47 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

You used the wrong 'are' lol

And yupps yupps...I sorta hope no one reads these lol
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3 posted 02-26-2009 09:48 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

oh yeah sry, OUR butts, lol, and me too.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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4 posted 02-26-2009 09:53 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Yay for correct spelling!! (&& poem farts HA!) Gosh no one NO ONE better read this lol
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5 posted 02-26-2009 09:55 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

They probably will, but who cares, i'm sure they'll read both our poem farts

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.
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6 posted 02-26-2009 10:06 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Yeaaa, I'm just glad Zack hasn't read mine yet...I'm sure he thinks us crazy enough...LOL! && Moonbeam too...
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7 posted 02-26-2009 10:09 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

i wonder what moonbeam will think of our farts, i think they're beautiful, but that's just me.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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8 posted 02-27-2009 04:16 AM       View Profile for moonbeam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonbeam

Well at least the poem was beautifully metrical!  See, you can't help writing in meter now.

I think though that it might be nearly time to work on WHAT you are writing as well as HOW.
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9 posted 02-27-2009 08:25 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

HaHa!! This is the effect of teens being hyper, silly, and bored!!

Yeah, it's probably time to work on that.
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10 posted 02-27-2009 08:30 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Ahhh! Meter is haunting me...I even DREAMED in meter last night.
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11 posted 02-28-2009 04:13 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

O.o Okay this poem is good.. but dreaming in meter???? Oookayy then.....

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LOL.. you guys make me laugh

LOVE THIS POEM.. It's great...

As for meter.. I'm not even going to attempt.. lol.. My brain is far to fazzled to even attempt lol.
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13 posted 03-01-2009 07:13 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Glad we can brighten someone's day lol
 
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