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As Long As We Get There

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synthetic
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0 posted 02-26-2009 12:47 AM       View Profile for synthetic   Email synthetic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for synthetic

This something borrowed something blue,
Will bring me down in front of you;
I'm promising to take you back,
To something to look forward to.

Starting, we contemplated ends,
Street corners where our knees would bend;
Praying to have our sins away,
By Heaven's showers angels send.

This back and forth is then and now,
It'll add up in the end somehow.
Tomorrow today, all the same

A masterpiece if we're the frame.
I mean, things do get out of hand;
Here's the bottom line, what stands out most is a success not planned.
© Copyright 2009 luc - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-27-2009 08:33 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

I liked the thoughts. I just found it a bit hard to follow so I had to reread it a few times.
 
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