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You sit inside my head

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freeand2sexy
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0 posted 02-25-2009 12:57 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy


This is just a vent, nothing much really.


You sat inside my head for months and never said a word,
Though you exposed a vibrant deep confusion down inside.
I knew you loved me, still, I feel the words you havenít heard,
That love is not always enough with even tears weíve cried.

You wander endless thoughts of fear inside my shuddered mind.
I plead and beg for you to leave, but you wonít fade away.
I see then how much I would gravel now to change the signs.
Would love prevail, and leave us near and close, or still in pain?

Youíre in the slowly beating songs I listen to at night.
Among the words, I feel your touch and see your lustrous smile.
You then escape for one second, not holding on so tight,
And then I knew, I wanted to just hold you for a while.

But we both know the gleaming waver of my tearful eyes
Weíve felt the pain Iím known to cause, and may cause once again
You wouldnít take me back; you donít deserve my awful lies
And though you sit upon my every cell, weíve found the end

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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GothicCherry
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1 posted 02-25-2009 01:43 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

"Youíre in the slowly beating songs I listen to at night.
Among the words, I feel your touch and see your lustrous smile."

I liked these lines a lot.
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2 posted 02-25-2009 03:04 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I realy love the ending stanza. I know how that feels to be in a position like that. Hope your doing better hon.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

freeand2sexy
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Thanks, guys, I'll feel better soon, I hope.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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