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To anyone who has had it tough, or is going through it now

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Belinda
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0 posted 02-25-2009 12:02 PM       View Profile for Belinda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Belinda

Life is a forever changing story,
Who knew that I would end up here?
Would never have guessed I'd be happy
Thought I would forever live in fear.

When I walked out and left,
I watched you crumble and fall.
I had to do it for us to get better,
No longer at your beckoning call.

I realised there was more to my life,
Than picking up the pieces of yours,
Leaving you alone in that house,
Was for a beneficial cause.

Not ashamed for what I did,
On the contrary I'm satisfied,
I wasn't trying to get revenge,
For all those times you lied.

I know that I sound bitter,
Yet that's not how I feel,
You're on the recovery road now,
And this time itís for real.

I admit that there are days,
That I feel a little low,
But thatís normal and itís okay,
It helps us to grow.


To anyone who's had it tough
Or is going through it now,
Don't lose sight of that glimmer of hope,
Because it's what gets you through, somehow.
© Copyright 2009 Belinda Black - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 02-28-2009 09:32 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Love It Hunny....

Going through this now.. Gives me hope.. makes me wish for something better...

Awesome Write, as per usual..

Don't worry about the lack of comments... People don't take the time to bother these days... gets depressing at times lol..
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2 posted 03-01-2009 08:27 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I agree. Great poem. I know the feeling. The whole "sounding bitter and not really feeling that way" Yeah I know that feeling well. Great poem.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

stacylynn418
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3 posted 03-07-2009 04:17 PM       View Profile for stacylynn418   Email stacylynn418   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stacylynn418

Not only is this well written, but I think that you're going to show a lot of people the importance of holding on to at least a little hope when they want to let go.
Belinda
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4 posted 03-09-2009 01:47 PM       View Profile for Belinda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Belinda

Thank you for your comments
I haven't written for quite a while and I think that's mainly because I'm trying to look to the future rather than dwelling on the past.
I think although the poems on the forum are amazing and very emotional, they can be quite upsetting and sometimes it feels as though we forget that things can get better and more often than not, they do.

Thanks again for the comments guys,
look forward to reading more of your work

Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

 
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