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lilmissflyaway
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since 01-19-2009
Posts 15
ohio,usa


0 posted 02-25-2009 12:56 AM       View Profile for lilmissflyaway   Email lilmissflyaway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lilmissflyaway


its all been
bulidin up
jailin up
as your in there
what do i do
do i move on
or wait patiently
with all this hurt
buking up inside a me
you were there
when i was weak
but you didnt give me the same considersation
to be there for you
there was no goodbye
it was bust at school
and i had to hear from it from my friends
you didnt trust me
you left me wondering
what to with all the lies
everythings just
building up
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kiwie15:D
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since 03-05-2009
Posts 13
california


1 posted 03-11-2009 11:07 PM       View Profile for kiwie15:D   Email kiwie15:D   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kiwie15:D

i like this poem could use a little work but really good.

                     always
                         kiwie
 
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