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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 02-24-2009 06:34 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

This is for a friend of mine, and I really hope you read it. You mean everything to us, please don't forget that hun...
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friends forever Pictures, Images and Photos

A warm sunny day
arrives with a roar.
Children scream in delight on the playground,
as we slowly sway on the swings.

Working really hard on our work
in a classroom filled with our friends.
Talking excitedly while being
the "odd-ones-out".

Our "fivesome" of us girls
having parties when we felt like it.
There was more love in that group
than I ever could have imagined.

That group of five slowly turned to four
as another year rolled around.
While she drifted,
the rest of us grew closer.

Tea-parties with profiterols
and photoshoots in our big poofy dresses.
Our memories lasted,
and new ones begun.

Summer time came again that year,
and you went away for a while.
But when you came back,
it was only for a little while.

So now when we party
its only on the weekends when we make arrangements
"where will it be?" "what should we bring?".
But thats okay because I cherish more.

Let's keep those parties going until we're gone,
so can you promise me that'll be a long time?
Because I know you have your struggles and we don't know,
but please remember that we love you.

So here were are again,
and I only have one final message for you:
You are you and I am myself,
but whatever the distance between us we'll be forever.

You can tell me anything,
and I won't judge no matter what.
But please help me past this fear,
that you might not be here next week.

Life is worth living because
you have been allowed to live it.
Now go out there and scream your heart out,
because I'll be here when you've got a sore throat.

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

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Suncleaver
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1 posted 02-24-2009 06:53 PM       View Profile for Suncleaver   Email Suncleaver   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suncleaver

She will be there. It's my personal mission.

A nice poem Julianna, I'm going to look all yours up now, I'd be honoured if you'd do me the same courtesy :p

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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yes of coarse.
thanks for everything already

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

XxForever.BrokenxX
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3 posted 02-24-2009 09:22 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

thanks sweetie. This is a beautiful poem.



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Emmalee Janelle
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4 posted 02-24-2009 09:58 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Pfft. Beautiful.. Its extraordinaire..

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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5 posted 02-25-2009 09:14 AM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

thanks em and zach!!!
as i read it again, i realized how much i screwed up, lol...oh well. the first time i wrote it it all got deleted *sighs* so i had to try and remember what i wrote.

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

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