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You love me (This is not about me)

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freeand2sexy
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0 posted 02-22-2009 09:27 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

This isn't much, but here it is.


You love me, dare I say this now
Or should I keep this secret, too
Along with others we allow
To welcome sin within our view

Thereís guilty passion on my face
But love I know will conquer all.
His once beloved wife, disgraced
The blame Iíll take if soon I fall

You love me, truth will show it soon
It grows until its plain to see
For love thatís old there is no room
Thereís only space enough for me

The pain is no where near my heart
Thereís only love inside of us
So why let shame split us apart
When we could live without the fuss

You love me, why do you love her
Ignore that you betrayed her trust
Because no longer are you pure
You gave into desire and lust.


With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.
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GothicCherry
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1 posted 02-22-2009 09:45 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

OMGAH, OMGAH, OMGAH!!! This is Sooo amazing. I love it. You're getting really good. Lol..
freeand2sexy
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2 posted 02-22-2009 09:48 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Haha, I guess! I just have no clue why I keep writing about adultery.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

RevengeIsMine
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3 posted 02-23-2009 01:49 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Hi Freeand2sexy.. I LOVE THIS POEM!... It's totally awesome.. ur getting to be such a skilled writer. Well done!
freeand2sexy
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4 posted 02-23-2009 02:01 AM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Aw, Thank you so much!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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5 posted 02-23-2009 07:46 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Pssht!!! This is amazingly good!!!! Your getting really really good!!! Better then me.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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