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Falling rain
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0 posted 02-22-2009 02:01 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I was searching through my folder and I found this. I don't know if I wrote it or someone else did and I saved it for some reason.

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Something deep inside
tells me to get grip.
That boy ain't worth any of your time
You know that's truth falling form your lips

But in that same place I feel a yearning
A distant feeling oh so strong.
My heart is aching from it all.
Its been hurting for oh too long.

Why is it that good guys finished last?
And that fairy tales are somehow wrong.
That no body really has happy endings
And truth is only found in sad love songs.

This world seems messed up.
Strange how it comes out that way.
Please tell me that I'm wrong
for I have a fear in what I say.
© Copyright 2009 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
nina1522
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1 posted 03-01-2009 09:23 PM       View Profile for nina1522   Email nina1522   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nina1522

i love the last stanza and  when you (or the personwho wrote it ) said there is more truth in sad love songs. great job!
kiwie15:D
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2 posted 03-05-2009 02:06 PM       View Profile for kiwie15:D   Email kiwie15:D   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kiwie15:D

i am all new to this but personally i love the last stanza as well as nina. for who ever wrote it was a really good poem
precious pearls
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I LOVED IT!!!!
Just wow, it spoke of so much truth and honesty, absolutley great!!!
 
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