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As the Clock Strikes Twelve


A life was saved tonight,
You stopped a bullet in thin air.
I've never seen a closer call,
than that one right there.
I was almost out of reason,
to keep on living life.
I think that without you,
I would have died tonight.

So I'm thanking you Suncleaver,
To me you're called a hero.
I'll remember the promise I made you;
I will be here tomorrow.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
   {~~*~~}

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1 posted 02-21-2009 01:08 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

hey good news! glad to hear you are ok

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I knew you'd come through Emily. Don't forget your own strength too, all I did was show you how to find it.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

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Emily,

please check your email
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4 posted 02-21-2009 10:45 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Luke you just saving everyone's life lately huh? Keep it up mate.
Great poem Em's

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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5 posted 02-21-2009 07:41 PM       View Profile for Suncleaver   Email Suncleaver   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suncleaver

You'll never be left out in the cold little poet.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

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6 posted 02-21-2009 07:43 PM       View Profile for Suncleaver   Email Suncleaver   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suncleaver

And my real name's Luke. You'll have to excuse me for replying in two posts, I've just got back from the pub.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

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7 posted 03-06-2009 09:03 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

I really like the first two lines of this.
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