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Moonbeam, This is a song that I was singing. Kay? So its not gonna have its da,dums or its pattern. Just letting you know But I think this poem is really cliché, you know? Oh well. Enjoy
I'll wait for you at the door
Be there to watch you soar
To comfort you when it rains
Hug you to erase the pain

Time's got nothin' on me
I love you, its plain to see
Just hold on tight
I'll kiss you under moonlight

Always be there for you
We'll make it through
Stay with me love
We'll fly away like turtle doves


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Okkkk, really really confusing. It's like you took parts out of random poems and just through them together. I couldn't get anything out of this for that reason.
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I know it pretty much sucks.
 
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