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inevitable emotions (revised.. i think)

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im still not sure if the structure is right. just wondering what i need to do to make it right. i know its too short and not that great. but i hope to expand on it.

Unspoken  anger pulses through my body.
Foriegn thoughts fill my head entangling me in confusion.
Involuntary actions leak out of my closed mouth and pores


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