im still not sure if the structure is right. just wondering what i need to do to make it right. i know its too short and not that great. but i hope to expand on it.
Unspoken anger pulses through my body.
Foriegn thoughts fill my head entangling me in confusion.
Involuntary actions leak out of my closed mouth and pores
[This message has been edited by nina1522 (02-20-2009 09:53 PM).]