Small town, Illinois
That helps oh so much. I finally caught the da, dum pattern. But this also makes it hard to do the syllable patterns and the da, dum patterns. I threw in the falling, the, and with's to keep the even syllable pattern. But now that you went through it and I actually read it all with the da,dum pattern this whole poem is messed up.. GRRRR.. Oh well. I'll just keep both things in mind and try to work on it. Thanks M
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