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0 posted 02-20-2009 10:18 AM       View Profile for prettypinkrebel   Email prettypinkrebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for prettypinkrebel

SOOOO not my best write!! but thanks


As ready as I am for you, as much As i really care,
your feelings change for me everyday I realize you will never really be there
You spoke the words I love you and told me this felt right
Then said goodbye in the mdst of the twilight.
I still dont understand the way your mind changes and I probably never will.
This pain it hurts and yes it's real the way I feel
it wont change I love you
your just not ready to love me too
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1 posted 03-11-2009 11:12 PM       View Profile for kiwie15:D   Email kiwie15:D   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kiwie15:D

okay this one i really do love. i have been going through the same thing. and this line "You spoke the words I love you and told me this felt right
Then said goodbye in the mdst of the twilight." is my favorite.. i am a big twilight fan..well anyways your first four words i think should be you title

                     always
                         kiwie
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I agree. This was pretty good. Keep it up.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

 
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