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What I've Should'of Learned
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What I've Should'of Learned |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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This poem is a vent. I wasn't really gonna bother with the syllables pattern tonight. Enjoy? I watched as you packed your bags I took a picture and hoped it would last Memories are my only thoughts But they just linger in our past I'm just that apple who fell too far from the tree I'm just burning; rotting away While your growing into something more promising Having your moment in the light of day Did you feel it when I said 'i love you'? Did I ever catch your glance? Who were you trying to fool hun? Did I ever stand a chance? Was I just apart of this act? A pawn in this charade Now your gone and I'm left here Leading in this sorrowful parade All the laughs you sang Were prolly killing you inside A plaster mask on your face I guess it was that easy to hide But these odds are against me And all bets are off Its hard to face these truths But I finally see that I was better off |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
I like this! and I love the words you use. The flow could have been a bit better, but its super awesome for a vent. With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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nina1522 Member
since 2009-02-14
Posts 189 |
holy shhh.... wish i could swear on this site. this was really good. wow, great job |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Gosh! I love this!! I like how in the last line your used the bets are off line and then the word face. It reminded me of how life is filled with many poker faces. |
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