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Darkened Daylight (just a random title)

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland


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I'd like to go anywhere,
far away from here.
Pack up and leave behind all my fear.
Forget all this pain,
let everything free,
Start all over,
find a new me.

I'd love to see you smile,
just forget all they said.
It would make me so happy to get these problems out of my head.
Oh what I would do,
to see one truly happy person.
Oh the things I would do,
to find something worth living for.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
   {~~*~~}

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Suncleaver
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1 posted 02-19-2009 05:58 PM       View Profile for Suncleaver   Email Suncleaver   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suncleaver

A stark beauty within this poem Emilee.

Nice work.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

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2 posted 02-19-2009 06:18 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Awwwwww... Nice poem...
RevengeIsMine
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3 posted 02-20-2009 05:29 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Loved It Emmi.. You a ledgend...

xxx <3
GothicCherry
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4 posted 03-06-2009 09:04 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

I think everyone would like to see a truly happy person.
GothicCherry
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5 posted 03-06-2009 09:05 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

I liked your 'random title' btw
stacylynn418
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6 posted 03-06-2009 03:36 PM       View Profile for stacylynn418   Email stacylynn418   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stacylynn418

This is really good, and I relate to it a lot, which I'm sure a lot of people can. It flows really nicely too :]
 
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