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Octave
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0 posted 02-19-2009 02:32 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Octave

Even Odd Is Even

Sometimes I think Iím crazy
That my mind is inside out
That no one understands me
Donít know what Iím about

My pages are glued together
My heart is hidden in my head
I speak in full stops and numbers
When I walk I fly instead

I live in my own little spaceship
With my own stars as my friends
I sing out in even digits
And sit on the latest trends

Nothing must touch another
Solitude is peace of mind
Life is eaten by the slice
And sings out from deep inside

My hands are maps of past regrets
My face acts out upon a stage
No one sees my flighty thoughts
Or my voice that hums such rage

My arms are wrapped around myself
Like an itch I canít quite reach
The panic that seems to threaten me
Is swallowed down like bleach

Sometimes I think Iím crazy
That my mind is on its own
But the curious thing is that maybe
I donít want to be alone.


The funny thing is i think i like this poem.
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XxForever.BrokenxX
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1 posted 02-19-2009 10:38 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

"Sometimes I think IÔŅĹm crazy
That my mind is on its own
But the curious thing is that maybe
I donÔŅĹt want to be alone."
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This is really good. I especially liked the ending.
But don't worry, nobody likes to be alone, and if we all stick together, no one has to be.

Great write.
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2 posted 02-20-2009 01:00 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Everyone is crazy just few are those who act upon it.
I like your poem lots. lol

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!


3 posted 02-20-2009 02:07 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

I like your poem too.

Alison
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same here Boshii2
 
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