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Admiration

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Eeyore7793
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0 posted 02-17-2009 08:46 PM       View Profile for Eeyore7793   Email Eeyore7793   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eeyore7793

When you finally find a special someone
That makes your heart flutter and sing
It is the best feeling that could ever overcome you
But when that one is forbidden
Your heart is engulfed with trechory and sorrow
Yearning to confess to him the feelings you savor
But there are restraints that seem near to impossible to overcome
Restraints built up of confusion and fear
Having the one desire to be held by him
And be embraced in his loving arms
But the fear of rejection overwhelms you
So you remain where you stand
Admiring the one you long for from afar
Fading slowly into the distance
And your one wish is to stop him
To keep him by your side
But your apprehensive
Frightened of the consequences that might occur
That come with chasing after the one you love

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1 posted 02-17-2009 11:56 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

captured. i know this feeling. and it put it into precise perfect words.
good job!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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