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De Leon
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since 02-12-2009
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0 posted 02-17-2009 01:20 AM       View Profile for De Leon   Email De Leon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for De Leon


This is my first so keeps the laughs to a minimum =)lemme no what u think

If someone were to ask me last year who you were,
Id have little to even say
Now i can fill a library with my thoughts i developed to today
Id write a book of poems if only to make you smile
Even now wanting to tell you i miss you after only a little while
And its strange how quickly these feelings developed within me,
From just seeing you as a friend to wanting to see you beside me.
It makes me happy.
Makes me smile now thinking of the poems you showed me.
I couldnt help but thinking i knew they were for me
Guess now we just wait and see where all this takes us and what the future has in store for you and me.

© Copyright 2009 De Leon - All Rights Reserved
GothicCherry
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since 09-16-2008
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1 posted 02-17-2009 08:29 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Hmmm, the structure is off. Good ideas though. An alright first post.
GothicCherry
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since 09-16-2008
Posts 471
TN


2 posted 02-17-2009 08:30 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Oh I almost forgot: Welcome to PIP!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


3 posted 02-17-2009 10:42 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Welcome to Passions!

Please, check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

ForgottenWorks
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since 01-31-2009
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4 posted 02-17-2009 11:02 AM       View Profile for ForgottenWorks   Email ForgottenWorks   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ForgottenWorks

Welcome to PIP!
nina1522
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since 02-14-2009
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5 posted 02-17-2009 08:29 PM       View Profile for nina1522   Email nina1522   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nina1522

hey im new too. WELCOME
nina1522
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since 02-14-2009
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6 posted 02-17-2009 08:30 PM       View Profile for nina1522   Email nina1522   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nina1522

i also just posted my first poem a couple of days ago. this is a great website to explore the different types of poetry. good job.
rebelangelv
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since 05-28-2007
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7 posted 02-17-2009 11:58 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

awwww cute!!1 welcome to piptalk!
and u should tell her/him how u feel

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

 
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