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RevengeIsMine
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Australia


0 posted 02-16-2009 03:22 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RevengeIsMine


Tell me why youíre not listening
To a single word Iíve said
Then tell me why Iím crying
Here on somebody elseís bed

Then tell my why my shallow heart
Is bleeding out in pain
And tell me why the life I live
Is driving me insane

Itís almost hard to walk away
I guess Iím not that strong
Iím sick of crying stain-glassed tears
And admitting that Iím wrong

I canít help that Iím a failure
Iíve always tried my best
I guess thatís not enough for you
And you need all the rest

You see I doubt youíre worth the effort
But Iím far too blind to see
That the remarks you dish out everyday
Are slowly killing me

Someday soon Iíll fight again
But for now Iím just too tired
Your words to me are poison
And it seems youíve got me wired

So for now Iíll just stop breathing
Even though Iím afraid of dying
Life shouldnít be this hard
And Iím really sick of trying.
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Clockwork_Orange
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Space Camp, IN


1 posted 02-16-2009 06:48 AM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

I canít help that Iím a failure
Iíve always tried my best
I guess thatís not enough for you
And you need all the rest

mmmhm so many time ive tried to put this down on paper. your words are too perfect.

the wordspinner strikes again.

~ you cant run from yourself ~

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2 posted 02-16-2009 11:59 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I agree. Many of us have felt this feeling but couldn't find the right words. Jess you are amazing. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise.
-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

GothicCherry
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since 09-16-2008
Posts 471
TN


3 posted 02-16-2009 07:43 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

The rhyme scheme was sort of everywhere, but the words were splendid and very meaningful. Nice work..
XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland


4 posted 02-17-2009 01:57 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

It'll all work out Jess, don't worry.



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Emmalee Janelle
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