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Stars Last Forever, But Smiles Make Them S H I N E

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 02-16-2009 12:18 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX


If you feel like you're alone,
and you just can't get through;
look up at the stars and know,
I'm thinking of you.
I know it's not much of a promise,
but my heart wont ever lie.
Just look a little closer
to the foggy midnight sky.

The moon wonít turn her back,
the stars shine just for you.
Don't give up on today,
You can make it through.

Trust with all your heart,
Donít let clouds get you down,
Look up to the sky;
Please rid of that frown.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
   {~~*~~}

© Copyright 2009 Emmalee Yuri - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
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Australia


1 posted 02-16-2009 02:31 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Love It Em.. Love you.. makes me believe in myself.. Another PIP Legend..
GothicCherry
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2 posted 02-16-2009 07:38 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Amazing..Very Beautiful..
Suncleaver
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3 posted 02-16-2009 08:27 PM       View Profile for Suncleaver   Email Suncleaver   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suncleaver

A lovely poem XxForever.BrokenxX

After your comments on my first two poems 'An Angel Walks the Stone Halls of Death' and 'In the Path of Shadows' I thought that you'd abandoned us.

Welcome Back <3

Ps. I don't usually trawl the teen forum, I just have you on my watch list.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

Falling rain
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4 posted 02-16-2009 08:56 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I see the rhyming dictionary helped you a little. And it looks like it payed off!!! Great work hun

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

Shadow Poet
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5 posted 04-25-2009 05:16 PM       View Profile for Shadow Poet   Email Shadow Poet   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Shadow Poet

Cool. A very heartfelt piece of poetry. Much enjoyed.

Shadow Poet

Leanne <3
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6 posted 04-28-2009 09:26 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

This whole poem was absolutely beautiful,
but this was my favourite part...

"If you feel like you're alone,
and you just can't get through;
look up at the stars and know,
I'm thinking of you.
I know it's not much of a promise,
but my heart wont ever lie.
Just look a little closer
to the foggy midnight sky."

It all seems so genuine.
so perfect.

Kalysta
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since 04-02-2009
Posts 41
Ohio


7 posted 05-17-2009 10:21 PM       View Profile for Kalysta   Email Kalysta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kalysta

I really enjoy reading this. I hope you keep writing just like this. You have your own special technique. I love it.
~Kalysta~

~Kalysta~

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