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Clockwork_Orange
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0 posted 02-15-2009 12:31 AM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange


i saw the note
sitting by the sink
all folded up
in smudged black ink
were you crying out your heart
or is this evidence unclear


this cities growing dark tonight
its a blackout, so turn the lights out
just another long night alone
i wish you were here with me

© Copyright 2009 Bryan Lucas - All Rights Reserved
GothicCherry
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1 posted 02-15-2009 10:38 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Loved tha imagery
freeand2sexy
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2 posted 02-15-2009 01:54 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Enjoyed this a lot!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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3 posted 02-15-2009 07:25 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

You have hit a good writing spell!! I really like this dude. Is this a song?

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

GothicCherry
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4 posted 02-15-2009 07:27 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Hmmm, is it a song? I thought the same thing when I first read it.
RevengeIsMine
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5 posted 02-16-2009 02:29 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

I Loved It.. I Always Do..

Your A Ledgend...
Clockwork_Orange
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6 posted 02-16-2009 06:47 AM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

yes it is a song. and ive got about twelve or so ready to put down on a album.... who wants a josalintower cd soon? lol

~ you cant run from yourself ~

 
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