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Pot Kettle Black
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Pot Kettle Black |
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Octave Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 186Highlands, Scotland. |
Pot Kettle Black I just want you to know I understand this mess Deep inside this black hole I have something to confess When we lie side by side Our bodies sigh as one No words are needed Nothing needs to be done I think I understand you I didn’t ask for any more I thought I understood you Now I’m not so sure What happened in this spiral Of confession and regret The lines don’t match up I feel like I’m in debt I don’t like this feeling Of a glassy loneliness Can’t unknot these fingers From this tearstained mess My words taint my lips I can’t seem look at you Where did I go wrong What happened to us two I chew my nails down To signify this pain You words are engraved Marked with your disdain I don’t know what I’ve done To cause this twisted chaos I don’t know how to fix it Or just maybe all is lost I just want you to know I don’t want this anymore We can fix it, we are all But… Now I’m not so sure. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Wow, many relationships go through this phase loads of times...I like your writing style a lot might I add and your words flow amazingly. |
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