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Pot Kettle Black

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Octave
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since 07-29-2008
Posts 188
Highlands, Scotland.


0 posted 02-14-2009 01:07 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Octave

Pot Kettle Black

I just want you to know
I understand this mess
Deep inside this black hole
I have something to confess

When we lie side by side
Our bodies sigh as one
No words are needed
Nothing needs to be done

I think I understand you
I didnít ask for any more
I thought I understood you
Now Iím not so sure

What happened in this spiral
Of confession and regret
The lines donít match up
I feel like Iím in debt

I donít like this feeling
Of a glassy loneliness
Canít unknot these fingers
From this tearstained mess

My words taint my lips
I canít seem look at you
Where did I go wrong
What happened to us two

I chew my nails down
To signify this pain
You words are engraved
Marked with your disdain

I donít know what Iíve done
To cause this twisted chaos
I donít know how to fix it
Or just maybe all is lost

I just want you to know
I donít want this anymore
We can fix it, we are all
ButÖ
Now Iím not so sure.
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GothicCherry
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since 09-16-2008
Posts 471
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1 posted 02-15-2009 10:48 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Wow, many relationships go through this phase loads of times...I like your writing style a lot might I add and your words flow amazingly.
 
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