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prettypinkrebel
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The Tension has ended, The Question waas answered.
Quickly and unexpected as he said the words.
I love you to her.
She only wanted to smile again for he was the one her smile was for
She finally got what she wanted could this be happening to her?
She's now laying worried o  the floor
Her heart open to hm agian will it break or will it mend?? Only time will tell.....Finally!!

**~~ this isnt my best it's a vent! But I hope you like ~~**
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1 posted 02-13-2009 09:10 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

oh! I do like this poem! Even though it was a vent it's still good.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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I like it too. Vents make for nice short works. Glad I read this one.
 
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