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Untold

I'm an open wound that wont stop bleeding
A smile that hides the pain I'm feeling
So many eyes but no one seeing
They're the cause of my untold dreaming
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Oh wow. I can connect to this short poem very well. Great work! I like it

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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I love this one! It's not long but it sums up the emotions very well! Library.
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