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Uncertain For Now

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GothicCherry
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His response is hesitant
Impatience is building within me
I would cry but he would see
No need for that impairment

We are still wrapped as one for now
A few more seconds could change that
I guess I fell to hard to fast
Trembling at thoughts so foul

Iím not sure of his ideas or intentions
The pieces of my pre-broken heart sinking
In still waters they drown, and I quit singing
His answer will come soon to break the tension
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1 posted 02-15-2009 10:47 AM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

wow real passion here. i loved it. amazing.

~ you cant run from yourself ~

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Thanks!
 
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