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Love's Been Shed (really short)

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GothicCherry
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0 posted 02-12-2009 07:32 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for GothicCherry


Another place and a different face
Tears still rain from pure disgrace
Hearts pulled apart by hatred
Our love has now been shed
No hope itís all shattered
Nothing else truly mattered
Life has lost its meaning
Andthe truth isnít worth seeing
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1 posted 02-12-2009 09:53 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Ahh! Little to say this poem was amazing! And I'm not just saying this. It really was good! Love it to bits and back.
Keep up the writing!!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

freeand2sexy
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2 posted 02-13-2009 01:37 AM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Ooh, i like this one! Good job!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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3 posted 02-13-2009 02:32 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Sometimes less is indeed more.
You captured it all.
Well done!

GothicCherry
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4 posted 02-15-2009 10:37 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Thanks, I appreciate the comments.
Clockwork_Orange
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5 posted 02-15-2009 10:45 AM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

really fast and short rhythm thats catchy...whats not to love about this one??
GothicCherry
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6 posted 02-15-2009 11:18 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Well...LOL! I could think of many things people wouldn't like about this one. I won't though. Thanks...
ForgottenWorks
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7 posted 02-17-2009 11:08 AM       View Profile for ForgottenWorks   Email ForgottenWorks   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ForgottenWorks

Love this one!
nina1522
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8 posted 02-17-2009 08:26 PM       View Profile for nina1522   Email nina1522   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nina1522

short and well not particuarly sweet so... short and great. loved this poem. VERY GOOD.
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