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Octave
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0 posted 2009-02-10 03:25 PM



Swallowing Black Holes

Skipping on the sunshine
With a smile on my face
Hands linked in pure ecstasy
Words coated with such grace

Swallowed into rainbows
And sequin studded space
Body swollen with this feeling
Of belonging in a place

Face glows with content
As I fit in place just right
No need to force the edges
No need to try and fight

Buckets of shattered stars
Line the way to destination
The shoes do fit and there is
No need for hesitation

Finger nails are bitten short
So mirrors make more sense
I feel no temptation, I’m
Not sitting on that fence

I finally feel I fit in
I finally feel as if I know
That this is my part in life
I’m no longer just for show

Body sings with happiness
Calling from deep inside
The darkest hole that begs me
That I swallow in my stride

Because I’m

Skipping on the sunshine
With a smile on my face
Hands linked in pure ecstasy
I have finally found my place

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1 posted 2009-02-10 05:25 PM


Oh my God! This is just perfection! No question about it! I simply love it!
This is going in my library for sure.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
2 posted 2009-02-11 12:09 PM


Absolutely wonderful!!!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

stil_watrs_run_deep
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since 2008-01-05
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missouri
3 posted 2009-02-12 05:14 PM


amazing :]
thats all i have to say lol

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