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Swallowing Black Holes

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Octave
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0 posted 02-10-2009 03:25 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Octave


Swallowing Black Holes

Skipping on the sunshine
With a smile on my face
Hands linked in pure ecstasy
Words coated with such grace

Swallowed into rainbows
And sequin studded space
Body swollen with this feeling
Of belonging in a place

Face glows with content
As I fit in place just right
No need to force the edges
No need to try and fight

Buckets of shattered stars
Line the way to destination
The shoes do fit and there is
No need for hesitation

Finger nails are bitten short
So mirrors make more sense
I feel no temptation, Iím
Not sitting on that fence

I finally feel I fit in
I finally feel as if I know
That this is my part in life
Iím no longer just for show

Body sings with happiness
Calling from deep inside
The darkest hole that begs me
That I swallow in my stride

Because Iím

Skipping on the sunshine
With a smile on my face
Hands linked in pure ecstasy
I have finally found my place
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1 posted 02-10-2009 05:25 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Oh my God! This is just perfection! No question about it! I simply love it!
This is going in my library for sure.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

freeand2sexy
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2 posted 02-11-2009 12:09 AM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Absolutely wonderful!!!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

stil_watrs_run_deep
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missouri


3 posted 02-12-2009 05:14 PM       View Profile for stil_watrs_run_deep   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stil_watrs_run_deep

amazing :]
thats all i have to say lol
 
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