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A Poem to Gayle

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Gasken
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0 posted 02-10-2009 12:24 PM       View Profile for Gasken   Email Gasken   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gasken

             A Heart that won't Lie

Staring at you makes me feel complete
That it leads me to a fast heartbeat.
Looking into your eyes would struck me down
That even a fish in the water would be drown.

A simple smile on your face would make me satisfied
Like a man that is contented with his lovingly bride.
Thinking of you is not difficult to do
A Heart that won't Lie, Yes! that's true.

I admit that i find birds that could sing me a beautiful song
But until now they couldn't find a right masterpiece and would not last so long.
Finding the right tune for my song is hard to think of
For it needs time and patience to hear it so soft.

Memories of you from the past would still remain in my mind
Reminding my heart to keep it safe and fine.
Forgetting you is not going to happen
For my heart won't lie, everything else were nothin'.

                                      
                                    Gasken

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Clockwork_Orange
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1 posted 02-10-2009 09:32 PM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

this was an interesting piece to read. i liked the idea of the birds. great imagery there.

~ you cant run from yourself ~

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2 posted 02-11-2009 12:53 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I agree. Interesting. I like it though!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

 
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