that So Cal
I think that you started out very well. I especially liked these lines:
"Today I've learned more about you
What color your eyes turn in the sun's first rays
The songs you love to play
The words that felt so real
Echoing with a meaning"
But you kinda lost me at:
"It's not my fault no one knows I exist"
It's probly just me, but it just didn't seem to flow right...
Anyway, thanks for sharing!
There is power in the pen.