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Teen Poetry #9

Miseralbe At Best

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2009-02-09 12:55 PM

I know I can make it through
Although doubt is my shadow
Hanging by me until the end
Hauntingly waiting for tomorrow.

Its hard to let go
I always held on so strong.
But how was I to know?
That it wasn't gonna last that long

I'll think nothing of it
When I see the guy hold your hand
I'm not gonna get upset over something
That I can't command.

I'm not gonna pretend to be okay
Because I'm not a fake
I'm sorry for what I did
I'm sorry for being a mistake.

I can't live without you
And I miss the old days
But I can't change your mind
Its futile for me to stay

Its easier for me to say it
Good bye is the only way
Although it's hurting me
I'll do it anyway.

I know I can make it through
As I set my mind to rest
I just know this..without you
I'll always be miseralbe at best.

(Structure isn't good. Pretty much another vent.)

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2009-02-10 03:30 PM

"If you feel like ur alone,
and u just cant get through.
Look up at the stars,
and know someone's thinkin' of you."
---------------
Je suis ici pour toi

Emmalee Janelle
{~~*~~}

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2009-02-10 05:20 PM

Thank you Emmalee...

"Vous Emily est un des peu de gens qui quelqu'un soignent m'aiment."

The French is sorta vague so you might have to guess a bit. Hahaha

Thanks for reading..
-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

3 posted 2009-02-15 11:09 AM

I've notice that the pictures you associate with your poetry really do add to the quality. Nice thoughts.

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