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Clockwork_Orange
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0 posted 02-08-2009 11:47 AM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange


i can hear your dreams
whispered in my ears
every fantasy
of anywhere but here

far away from this place
is where you want to be

and i cant give you the mountains
i cant give you the sky
i can only tell you i love you
untill the day i die

i cant give you the world
hell i cant give you a ride
i dont know what you see in me
but girl you make me happy
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Assassin_of_Verse
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since 10-23-2007
Posts 330
that So Cal


1 posted 02-12-2009 02:39 AM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

Very honest and unlike myself, very straightforward.
I really liked the little twist at the end. It brought a sense of closure. (This is hard for me sometimes.)

There is power in the pen.

GothicCherry
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2 posted 02-15-2009 11:03 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

WHOA!! I read this once and liked it. I read through it again and enjoed it even more. Then, I looked over it once more and the feelings pulsed through me even though it was written plainly and straight-forward. I think that's what made me love it actually. Keep writing so I may keep reading. lol...
 
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