I really like this. very sweet, and you ahve some lovely images in it.
My only crits would be, your rythm [sorry about spelling] is off in places. You could do with a few extra words here and there. Read it out loud. it should flow smoothly and fluently with no stops and starts. This will help you find the weaker spots of the poem, and theny ou can add/remove certain words. The picture goes nicely with this as well.
Nicely done though. Keep it up. (: