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GothicCherry
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0 posted 02-04-2009 10:25 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for GothicCherry


Many words reach my ears
telling unwritten tales of dread,
becoming the static of my fears.

You ran to me for everything.
At the finale I ran with fright,
turning from your love; fleeing.

Really it never wouldíve worked
Iím scared to get too close
My heart so many times was jerked

Apologizing doesnít cure heartbreak
Only the clock ticking may help.
But I am sorry for what you must take
Forgive me please for love so fake.

© Copyright 2009 Michaela J. McHone - All Rights Reserved
freeand2sexy
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1 posted 02-04-2009 10:36 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

"Forgive me please for love so fake."

Omg i felt the same way about 2 monthes ago with my ex, the last line sums it all up for me.

Really nice poem!!!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.
gdcod2player
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2 posted 02-04-2009 11:34 PM       View Profile for gdcod2player   Email gdcod2player   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gdcod2player

Very  nice
i like the last line
it says so much
ill read again
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3 posted 02-05-2009 09:24 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Ahhh!!! Library, library, library!! hehehe. This poem I could connect very well. Great job!!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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i really loved this. it was beautifully written.
library

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

Assassin_of_Verse
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5 posted 02-12-2009 02:37 AM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

"Apologizing doesn't cure heartache"
*Sigh* if only this weren't true. Lol, great job.

There is power in the pen.

pandabear
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6 posted 03-08-2009 11:13 PM       View Profile for pandabear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandabear

really really good poem it reminds me of my ex in a way but anyways really good keep writing
RevengeIsMine
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7 posted 03-09-2009 07:58 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

GREAT JOB...

Amazingly written..

P.S... I saw your comment on another poem belonging to another member.. I LOVE YOUR HONESTY!
GothicCherry
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8 posted 03-09-2009 08:21 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Thanks Jess
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