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gdcod2player
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0 posted 02-03-2009 11:59 PM       View Profile for gdcod2player   Email gdcod2player   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for gdcod2player


The thought crossed my mind
Iíve realized Iím nothing
I donít think you know I love you
Wave goodbye with the moon rising

I wonít be around to face you in this lie
I donít want to be put down
This was the last time
Let this half sun be gone

The world I told was magic
Canít be found
The fire I had has been burning too hot
The spark it ignited in the cold air last night
With the hot sun keeping it burning bright
But the fire it once lit has burned out
It went cold to fast to realize what had happened

Let me find a new fire
To come to for its warmth I need now
Is there anyone out there that wants to help?
The girl I need to talk to is gone
Her fire kept me alive
It has gone away
Now the embers that kept me going strong have faded away
The light in my dreams has dimmed further
With one last gleam
I now feel free
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GothicCherry
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1 posted 02-04-2009 09:35 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Wow..Lots of imagery. I like..
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Nice, i like it!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

 
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