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nates2rad
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0 posted 02-03-2009 05:06 PM       View Profile for nates2rad   Email nates2rad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nates2rad

I am there always by her side,
Considered a friend and nothing more.
Oh, how i wish it were something more,
Something better somthing beautiful.

How can it be though,
If I can't muster the courage to ask.
Whats holding me back?
I do not know.

I will be there though,
Always with her,
A friend in her time of need,
A friend I will aways be.
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1 posted 02-04-2009 12:00 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

see that's tough. Cause it's so great to be their friend, if you lost that by saying you wanted more, it would be the worst. well, the worst next to not saying how you feel...and what if's start...self doubt....

it's a mess. I say go for it. I mean really? Why have that ache in your heart? Why look back on it with regret? trying feels a lot better cause if she doesn't like you that way but is a good friend, then she will still be there, and if she likes you back that way, then   awesome, right?!

if she doesn't like you that way and acts weird after, then move on knowing she isn't worth it  
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2 posted 02-04-2009 07:49 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Geez SEA.. You always have the wisdom and the right words to say.. I couldn't have said it better myself actually. Try it? If it doesn't work then oh well. Nice poem and hoping for the best for you.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

GothicCherry
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3 posted 02-04-2009 09:33 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Ummm, well normally you can tell if a girl likes you as more by how much she flirts so being a little more observant could help on this too...but seriously listen to Zach and SEA. They know what they are talking about lol nice read...
 
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