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I (Don't) Need a Hero

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ForgottenWorks
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I (Don't) Need a Hero

It's me against the world now isn't it?
I cannot tell a soul;it's my biggest secret
Nobody understands me;not at all
Although deep down I know, I will be my own down fall

Day by day,its all that passes my mind
I know I need someone to help me get rid of this cursed bind
I know I need someone to set me free
Someone to save me,to save me from me

Love it or hate it,of that I'm unsure
But all I know is that there is no cure
I know it's wrong,from my heart to my core
But when has that stopped anyone before?
My friend had posted this under a account that she made but this is my poem.
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awesome. i liked it alot. great words.
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I like this a lot. It's actually very pretty in a way. HaHa!

The format could use some cleaning up.

Nice word choice and phrasing.
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