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How could I let myself fall?
Kneeling on scraped up knees
Begging to find my light again
Hear my lonely plead.  

I use to fly high
But now I feel so low
How could I've let this happen?
Why did you have to use me so

My heart was your toy
Nothing more then a game
Someone for your amusement
It still hurts all the same

I walk by the people
Smiles spread across their face
I alone in the shadows
Feeling nothing but disgrace

I walk down this tunnel
Filled with sorrow and despair
At the end I see the light
Golden and fresh like the air

© Copyright 2009 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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wow. i don't get why no ones commented on this one zach. its amazing...and i love it.
it's got to be one of your best, and i'm not just saying that
library!

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

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Well, I was going to pick out my favorite part, but I couldn't decide! HaHa... Great poem. Really depressing though.
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3 posted 02-04-2009 11:11 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Haha. Ironic thing is that the "tunnel" represents depression and finding my way out of the tunnel is sorta a good thing, i think. lol Thanks for reading and your amazing compliments!!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

 
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