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Falling rain
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0 posted 01-29-2009 10:37 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

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Forgive me darling.
For I can't stop my tears flow
Its not my fault for what I am.
I thought you should know.

I lost my way many times
And I'm afraid to let anyone else in.
My mind and heart are quarreling
And this battle I can't win.

Every second is pain
Because I put my heart back together
Every memory is a razor blade
That lingers on cutting me forever.

I keep silent from your words
Because I don't know what to say.
How can I trust your words anymore?
Your promises never stayed...

I guess I was only second best
I wasn't good enough for you to stay
I tried to fix myself up
You just pushed me out of the way.

Forgive me darling
Because I'm too broken for you
I love you darling
Please know that's true..

[This message has been edited by Falling rain (01-31-2009 08:08 PM).]

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1 posted 01-30-2009 11:07 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Holy poo on a stick! What is with you lately? all you can write is this freakin' amazing poetry while i've got this freaking-forever-lasting writers block!
argh!
....phew..okay, im done now.
But seriously...this is amazing.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
   {~~*~~}

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2 posted 02-04-2009 09:55 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Omgah! I'm about to go crazy!! All of your poems lately are reminding me of how I've hurt guys in the past and now how I am probably fixing to pain yet another one...=[

I still love your poems though! && maybe reading of your heartbreak in such deep expressions will keep me from tearing at another's heart. Gosh, I'm such a mess now.  
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This is really good, Zach, this also reminds me of what i did to someone, everything you wrote seems to probably be what my ex was feeling. Nice poem!

So you're not the only mess Michaela!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.
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4 posted 02-04-2009 10:32 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Well, at least I'm not alone! Haha!!

Zach, it seems as though us girls are extremely cruel beings... I'm sorry!
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5 posted 02-04-2009 11:08 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Okay first thing... Girls aren't cruel on purpose. If you knew that you were gonna do that to a guy then I'm sure you wouldn't do it. But that fact is that you didn't know and the guy might be better now. And thanks for reading my poems. Its really nice to know I have a few fans.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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6 posted 02-17-2009 08:24 PM       View Profile for nina1522   Email nina1522   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nina1522

holy. ...if i could swear on this site i would. haha i cant believe how good this is everytime i click on a poem to read its by you. your really good. once agian another great poem
 
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