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freeand2sexy
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Do you insist on, pushing me?
Am I not good enough for you?
Do you try so hard, tempting me?
Isnít this what you plan to do?

Youíre dragging me by the ankle
As I try to loosen your grip
Tied with a rope, I am tangled
Struggling hard to make you trip

Didnít you, hold me in your arms
That one day when we only smiled
Didnít you, protect me from harm
Till it all changed, you turned so vile

Now why do I need to change, too?
Youíre pulling me towards your hate
And by now my ankle is bruised
Iím scared to think thereís no escape

Maybe I was wrong when, I thought
That you could someday love someone
Now Iím frighten to think, you fought
So hard, but then your anger won

Youíve been dragging me once again
But Iím still fighting like before
Though I struggle to find an end
Nails filed by the concrete floor

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

© Copyright 2009 Christine Juarez - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-29-2009 11:01 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Oh wow, oh wow!! This poem's just amazing! (Library)

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

freeand2sexy
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2 posted 01-30-2009 02:06 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Thanks Zach, means a lot

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

GothicCherry
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3 posted 02-04-2009 10:01 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Love this one Christine!! Sorry I never wrote back..Everything is so hectic here lately. Especially since Daddy is getting another divorce. Just e-mail me again sometime and I'll try to get back to ya...

Really enjoyed this btw.
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4 posted 02-04-2009 10:21 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Thanks

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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