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freeand2sexy
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0 posted 2009-01-29 12:25 PM



Do you insist on, pushing me?
Am I not good enough for you?
Do you try so hard, tempting me?
Isn’t this what you plan to do?

You’re dragging me by the ankle
As I try to loosen your grip
Tied with a rope, I am tangled
Struggling hard to make you trip

Didn’t you, hold me in your arms
That one day when we only smiled
Didn’t you, protect me from harm
Till it all changed, you turned so vile

Now why do I need to change, too?
You’re pulling me towards your hate
And by now my ankle is bruised
I’m scared to think there’s no escape

Maybe I was wrong when, I thought
That you could someday love someone
Now I’m frighten to think, you fought
So hard, but then your anger won

You’ve been dragging me once again
But I’m still fighting like before
Though I struggle to find an end
Nails filed by the concrete floor

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

© Copyright 2009 Christine Juarez - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2009-01-29 11:01 PM


Oh wow, oh wow!! This poem's just amazing! (Library)

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

freeand2sexy
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2 posted 2009-01-30 02:06 PM


Thanks Zach, means a lot

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

GothicCherry
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3 posted 2009-02-04 10:01 PM


Love this one Christine!! Sorry I never wrote back..Everything is so hectic here lately. Especially since Daddy is getting another divorce. Just e-mail me again sometime and I'll try to get back to ya...

Really enjoyed this btw.

freeand2sexy
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4 posted 2009-02-04 10:21 PM


Thanks

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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