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gdcod2player
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0 posted 01-29-2009 12:01 AM       View Profile for gdcod2player   Email gdcod2player   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for gdcod2player


The smile she has
Itís something that I canít let go
Why canít it find a way out?
Have I found something rare?
She wonít believe what I would do
I would find everything she wants
But whatís the use if she doesnít know Iím lost
Iím lost in her amazing smile
Can I lie?
Or will I die this time
The words I want to say
Itís just so far
Some say there is always someone else out there
Then why canít I find a smile that same way
Why canít I find a smile the same way?

The sea seems to shine
With the grace you left behind
My heart has filled the ocean full
With the blood ill leave for you
BABY WHATS YOUR NAME?
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GothicCherry
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1 posted 02-04-2009 10:30 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Awwwh!! It's so sweet.

There is still something about your style that is driving me crazy everytime I read your poems and no matter how many times I read it I can't pin point what's bothering me so much...

Still nice thoughts.
 
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