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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
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0 posted 2009-01-29 12:01 PM



The smile she has
It’s something that I can’t let go
Why can’t it find a way out?
Have I found something rare?
She won’t believe what I would do
I would find everything she wants
But what’s the use if she doesn’t know I’m lost
I’m lost in her amazing smile
Can I lie?
Or will I die this time
The words I want to say
It’s just so far
Some say there is always someone else out there
Then why can’t I find a smile that same way
Why can’t I find a smile the same way?

The sea seems to shine
With the grace you left behind
My heart has filled the ocean full
With the blood ill leave for you
BABY WHATS YOUR NAME?

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GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
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1 posted 2009-02-04 10:30 PM


Awwwh!! It's so sweet.

There is still something about your style that is driving me crazy everytime I read your poems and no matter how many times I read it I can't pin point what's bothering me so much...

Still nice thoughts.

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