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The tears

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NicoleRocker12367
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0 posted 01-28-2009 05:21 PM       View Profile for NicoleRocker12367   Email NicoleRocker12367   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit NicoleRocker12367's Home Page   View IP for NicoleRocker12367

Can't you see
my tears
they're so plain
can't hide em

Baby why can't you
quit hurtin me
I wish that we
could be together

you can't see
the tears
that run down
my cheeks

I wish we could
kiss and make it better
but nothin will
bring the love back
and erase the tears

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1 posted 01-28-2009 06:06 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I like it. Keep up the writing.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

GothicCherry
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Enjoyed this piece. Can't wait to see more from you.
daddysgurlxx5xx
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i very well enjoyed this poem... keep up the work
pandabear
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keep writing ur really good at it
 
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