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''But Not You''

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                 ''BUT NOT YOU''

Im crying here in these lonely room of mine,
Remembering the moment when You and I,
This heart what they called,
Is no longer a heart anymore,
It broke into pieces,
That no one could ever bring it back,
The way it was before..

If only You know,
You're a heaven sent that makes me happy,
And the devil's gift that makes me sad,
But Im glad You came,
Coz its better for me to love You and hurt by You,
Than loving someone else,
But not You..
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Nice poem. I like it.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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Enjoyed....
 
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