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nates2rad
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since 2008-12-17
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0 posted 2009-01-27 10:35 PM



There before me she walks away,
Its not her fault i might have pushed her that way,
I wasn't mean I wasn't cruel,
Only Caring, Nice, and Loving.

A friend I was,
In her time of need.
If only she would call I would be there,
To confort her and love her once again.

But she does not call and I wonder why.
Was it something I said?
Was it something I did?
Or, Was it simply just me?

I do not know the answers.
But I will not forget that beauty.
That kind and gentle soul,
If only she had know that I loved her so.

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i3n07red12
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since 2009-01-27
Posts 6
Brunei
1 posted 2009-01-28 12:28 PM


Hey thats a great poem i am looking for..i knew its nice after i read the title of your poem..great poem..i like it..
i3n07red12
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since 2009-01-27
Posts 6
Brunei
2 posted 2009-01-28 12:30 PM


a GREAT POEM!!!!
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since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois
3 posted 2009-01-28 12:48 PM


Nice poem!! I know the feeling pretty well. Keep up the writing.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

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