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Many nights I've cried.
Can't get the demons out of my head.
Thinking I was wrong in letting you go.
But here I sit, sewing my heart with thread.

I burned all your love letters
Cause what good are they now?
A constant living reminder
Of all your empty vows.

I see your new lover
Can't seem to stop the tears.
I hold on so tight to hope
Letting you go is what I fear.

As much as it really kills me
To finally let you go
I'll hold my ground and say
"I love you more then you'll ever know"



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Ive read many poems of this sort. Sometimes reminders are the best way to get over the past even though it is hard to think about. Love is so complicated and break-ups are brutal. You express your emotions well. Poetry helps the heart to heal for it lets you know what you really feel. That's the way I've always thought.
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2 posted 01-27-2009 10:37 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Yes I agree. That's mostly why I write poetry. Sorta like venting out emotions right? Thanks for reading!!!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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wow, just...wow. when i read this i was speachless. the words on my screen that you wrote speek so loudly, its amazing. everything was well writen and i loved all of it,
and yes...you're right, i can relate. super duper job with this one, its got to be one of my favorites.


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?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

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4 posted 01-28-2009 05:50 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

lol. Julianna I can always count on you giving awesome comments. Thanks for the comment hon. Hope things are going well with you.

Much love,
-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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Just amazing!!!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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6 posted 01-30-2009 05:07 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Thanks!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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loved it...<3

<3 i love u<3

 
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