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rose and blood Pictures, Images and Photos

As I lay in silent agony
Quenching blood to fill my veins
A never ending lust for this venom
As it leaves me wrenching in pain.

My heart lays silent in my chest
A constant reminder of my past
Now to live for eternity
Forever as an outcast.

Mortals fear me
Once they see my smile.
Hush now my darling
It'll only last a while.

Blood gone cold
Eyes filled with fire.
For I am the one and only.
Legendary vampire.
© Copyright 2009 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-27-2009 08:08 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Sweee-eet!! I really enjoyed this..

I like that it isn't very long because I normally get bored reading long poems; however, the content was interesting enough to where it could bear a few more stanzas without losing the reader I'm sure.

A few places should probably be punctuated differently, but besides that I can't think of anything to pick on.
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It sounded really good.
 
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