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Maybe Peace Will Come

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GothicCherry
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0 posted 01-26-2009 04:54 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for GothicCherry


Sometimes, I think Iíve been blind.
Maybe I was always covering up the wrongs.
Maybe Iíve never really had any good friends.
Sometimes, I just feel left behind.

Everyday, my life spins faster.
Maybe I was in slow motion before.
Maybe I was running so fast I never knew.
Everyday, finds my heart in plaster.

This time, Iím building confidence.
Maybe I could see the people in the masks.
Maybe revealing the soul will help me move on.
This time, will make more sense.

Now, I can ditch the drama at last.
Maybe Iíll find serenity in the presence of solitude.
Maybe peace comes with living away from influence.
Now, to live without the haunting past.
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1 posted 01-27-2009 07:06 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Very good write, i can relate

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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2 posted 01-27-2009 09:10 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

This was pretty good!

Only thing that bugged me while reading this was you said "maybe" a lot. Personally I don't like repeating the same word over and over.

But other then that this poem was pretty good!  

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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3 posted 01-27-2009 09:17 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Thanks!! I normally don't repeat myself a lot, but everything was so indefinite to me while writing this that it just seemed natural..
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