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Summer Storms & Wreckless Vow's (Tell Me How Do I Stop Crying)

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RevengeIsMine
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0 posted 01-26-2009 12:50 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Looking out across this storm
Tell me where did i go right
I'd take a penny for your thoughts
If i could bring you home tonight

And too think it's almost beautiful
all these raindrops falling down
To watch the lightning dance
right across this great big land

what i'd give to feel your hand
brush right across my face
to have you right her holding me
back here in our own place

There's not a second i don't miss you
And i keep praying for another chance
Just too hold you one last time
Just to see your face

But things aren't getting any easier
And i cry a little more each day
Baby i can't breathe without you
To think i almost gave up today

If you can't see i need you
Then you don't know me like you should
You get everything about me
The stuff nobody else could

So tonight i'll marry you
Even though your not here
We'll toast too forever
And we'll even use a beer

"Tonight I'll give you everything"
"My Strength, My love, my life"
"Through life and all your stuggles"
"I'll vow to be your wife"

But we both know i'm dreaming
You've been gone too long
The storm is slowly fading
As the radio changes song

So if your out there somewhere
Please come on home too me
I can't breathe without you
Your my life, Lost At Sea.....


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1 posted 01-26-2009 08:23 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Awwwww... I think I'm gonna cry.. haha. I was listening to "Thinking of You" by Katy Perry when I was reading this and I'm close to tears. haha. Great write honey. Hope God brings your man home.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

Earl Robertson
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since 01-21-2008
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2 posted 01-26-2009 11:06 AM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

I'm so sorry Jess. And I don't know what else to say. I'm praying for you.

My melancholy is purely my own

tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an acce


3 posted 01-26-2009 03:24 PM       View Profile for tearsoflove13762   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tearsoflove13762

this is so sad and a great write... I am sorry you are having to go through this may God give you strength
XxForever.BrokenxX
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4 posted 01-30-2009 10:56 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

you made me cry.
Stay strong hun, the world needs you.
I'm here for you like you always are for me.
luv ya lots,
             Em

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Emmalee Janelle
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