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lilmissflyaway
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since 01-19-2009
Posts 15
ohio,usa


0 posted 01-25-2009 08:24 AM       View Profile for lilmissflyaway   Email lilmissflyaway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lilmissflyaway


distance is but a 8 letter word
and so is bullshit
i doesnt matter how far away someone is
theycan still be there
in your heart in your soul
adn when one says
love and distance does not last
they are wrong
for you can have sucha
strong
intence
emotional
heartbreaking love
for some one hours away
distance is distance
it doesnt chang eour feelings
if it could
well maybe there would be less hurt people around
distance is distance
and
love is love
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tearsoflove13762
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since 09-05-2004
Posts 490
Texas.. and yes i have an acce


1 posted 01-25-2009 03:06 PM       View Profile for tearsoflove13762   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tearsoflove13762

good poem but just remember to use spell check 'intense instead of intence and a few typing mistakes are also there. I like the beginning of the poem with the 8 letter words alot. looking forward to reading more of your stuff
 
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