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lilmissflyaway Junior Member
since 2009-01-19
Posts 15ohio,usa |
distance is but a 8 letter word and so is bullshit i doesnt matter how far away someone is theycan still be there in your heart in your soul adn when one says love and distance does not last they are wrong for you can have sucha strong intence emotional heartbreaking love for some one hours away distance is distance it doesnt chang eour feelings if it could well maybe there would be less hurt people around distance is distance and love is love |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
good poem but just remember to use spell check 'intense instead of intence and a few typing mistakes are also there. I like the beginning of the poem with the 8 letter words alot. looking forward to reading more of your stuff |
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